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And again me and this silent night

Dark and deaf as nothing is right

Bulbs of optimism are might be fused

As I am feeling drained and refused

Words with question marks haunt my nights

And meaningless answers disturb my days

Life is much more than a smiling face

I wish my heart could cope with this life’s pace

Faces I have left behind still stares towards me

As I have taken something from them which doesn’t belong to me

 

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11 Comments

  1. really nice

  2. Your dark poems give me the chills!

  3. Nice with the rhyming. Simple and straightforward–for me, written from an uncomplicated heart. Thanks!

  4. Very well done!

    Have you heard the song – “Sound of Silence”? This poem reminds me of it 🙂

  5. oh God :O first time i understood a poem 😀

  6. nice poem… last line was a good one… could be taken different was, but makes you wonder a little. I like that.

    nice to see rhyming too. =)

  7. I guess I haven’t had a chance to read this. I was going to say that I missed your post. Your poetry is always prolific and humble. I’ve always loved the way you write in broken English, it gives your poetry such a unique voice. It feels so spiritual. You should collect all your thoughts in a book, a journal even, and publish it. Your observations are outstanding and your written voice is beautiful. My instructors at college would love your work.

  8. Faces I have left behind still stares towards me

    As I have taken something from them which doesn’t belong to me

    These lines are so haunting !

    Drop by at my blog too 🙂

    http://www.sadafhafeez.blogspot.com


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