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You in me

There is no evanescence of you in me

As there is no shadow of me in you

There is no anger for you in me

As there is silence for me in you

There is everything of you in me

As there is nothing of me in you

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16 Comments

  1. This is nice. Simple, not simple. It’s really rich. I like.
    –Pearl

  2. Wow, this is eerily appropriate for how I’m feeling about one of my relationships at present. Dark but very simplistic & sad. I do hope this is not something you’re feeling, it’s hard.

    • I just can wish u a very best of luck..as far as myself is concerned “no comments”

  3. wow!
    simplicity has a charm which no one can absolutely harm!

  4. It’s simply lovely. Thanks for sharing this.

  5. Strenghten thy heart for this I assure you.
    Forgive her even that she cannot forgive herself, for someday she shall miss you and have nothing tohold on to but her own regrets.

    • @Charles….I dont want to see her in regrets for sure…. and I wish she will never have regrets in her life

  6. hmm i dont like this :/ isnt this a one sided thought?
    maybe there is a lot of you in someone 😀

  7. oh baby, I love how u write. you speak from the heart and it touches mine way down deep…love u,

  8. “As there is silence for me in you”

    Really beautiful poem.

  9. I love the last 2 lines:

    There is everything of you in me

    As there is nothing of me in you

    Brilliant! 🙂


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