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When you will close your eyes to take rest

Then you will remember me

When you will find no one around you

Then you will remember me

When you will get angry and your cheeks get red

Then you will remember me

When someone will ask you to untie your hair

Then you will remember me

When someone will read your face

Then you will remember me

When you will get confuse about your decisions

Then you will remember me

When you will find nothing good

Then you will remember me

When you will flow my wait from your eyes

Then you will remember me

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18 Comments

  1. beautiful.
    reminds me of that song: jab koi pyaar se bulaye ga… tum ko aik shakhs yaad aye ga… 😉

  2. @Raajii. Thanks for the comment and referring my little effort to that beautiful song

  3. 🙂 amazinggggggggggggggggg!!!
    it has the echo!

  4. @ AD… thanks for the comment

  5. I like this one a lot. It reminds me of exactly what an ex-girlfriend told me once “Someday you’re really going to miss me.” Since then I have used that phrase a few times myself. Also like my friend Callula ended her poem “It’s not over – until I’m over you.” Very nice your sentiment is quite longing and sincere. You don’t always know what you have… Until it’s gone.

    Peace.

  6. @ Charles.. “You don’t always know what you have… Until it’s gone.”… very well said

  7. Don’t they always?
    This is beautiful.

  8. @Oracleofthepearl…. its my wish 🙂

  9. Very neat and touching. Kudos!

  10. @Bala… Thanks for visiting my blog…

  11. hits right through the bone! this is the exact thing i’m feeling right now… i wish the ex can read this.. thanks for sharing!

  12. so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttt abhi b aik song hy sumthng like :men yaad aonga jab khul k tum muskuraogy blah blah….

    really gud effort bhai:)

  13. Its sad that it takes leaving for someone to miss or remember another. Your poems always remind me of someone in my life, thanks…

  14. Simply beautiful!


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